Why Most Job Postings Fail
A job posting is a piece of persuasion copy. Your goal isn't to list requirements — it's to attract the right candidate while deterring the wrong ones. Most companies do the opposite: they write a laundry list of 20 requirements that scares off great candidates who don't meet 100% of them, while doing nothing to communicate why someone great would want to work there.
Research shows that women apply for jobs when they meet ~100% of listed requirements, while men apply when they meet ~60%. Bloated job descriptions actively bias your candidate pool.
The 7-Section Job Posting Formula
1. The Hook Headline
Stop at a generic job title. Instead of 'Senior Marketing Manager', try 'Senior Marketing Manager — Own the Demand Gen Strategy at a Scaling SaaS.' Tell candidates what makes this role unique.
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Add context: company stage, team size, what they'll own, or a differentiator.
2. The Why
In 2–3 sentences: why does this role exist, why now, and what impact will this person have? Skip the boilerplate about being 'an exciting opportunity' and be specific about the business challenge you're solving.
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Example: 'We're growing 3x year over year and our marketing team of 2 can't keep up. This person will build the function from the ground up.'
3. What You'll Do
List 5–7 specific responsibilities. Use action verbs. Focus on what this person will OWN, not just participate in. A good test: could this list apply to the same role at any company? If yes, make it more specific.
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Lead with the most exciting work. Candidates skim — put the compelling stuff first.
4. What We Need (Requirements)
Separate 'must have' from 'nice to have'. Keep must-haves to 5 or fewer. Avoid vague requirements like '5+ years of experience in a fast-paced environment' — be specific about the skills, not the years.
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Remove 'bachelor's degree required' unless the job genuinely requires it. It filters out great candidates with non-traditional backgrounds.
5. What We Offer
Be specific. 'Competitive salary' says nothing. List the actual salary range (required in many jurisdictions and always appreciated), benefits, remote policy, and any perks that differentiate you. Candidates run salary calculations before applying.
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Companies that include salary ranges get 30% more applicants on average.
6. Who We Are
3–4 sentences about your company. Focus on stage, culture, and mission — not founding year and office location. What does it feel like to work there? What do you care about?
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Avoid: 'We are a dynamic, innovative company that values synergy.' Write like a human.
7. The Application Process
Tell candidates what happens after they apply. How many interviews? What does the process look like? Transparency about process reduces drop-off and signals respect for candidates' time.
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Example: 'Our process: 30-min intro call → take-home exercise → 2 final interviews. We move in 2 weeks total.'
Words to Remove From Your Job Posting
“Rock star / ninja / guru”
Sounds immature, attracts the wrong culture
“Self-starter”
Every job posting says this — it means nothing
“Wears many hats”
Code for 'we're understaffed and you'll do everyone's job'
“Competitive salary”
State the range — transparency wins candidates
“Fast-paced environment”
Vague; tell them specifically what the pace looks like
“Team player”
A non-criterion — nobody applies saying they're not one
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